Two thoughts running through me mind Mark.
One is that it may have looked good to your eyes but hasn't transferred to a two dimensioned photo.
Two is that with a little more work to increase the saturation, lighten that grassy foreground and maybe a touch on the dark area above it, and I think you may have something.
Worth a try.
Silversnapper
[Apr 01, 2013 at 07:37 PM]
I agree with George here Mark and it's worth giving it another go, however, it's how you see/remember the scene that matters.
Beermonsta
[Apr 01, 2013 at 08:02 PM]
It looks like A re edit might bring out the best in this image Mark some good suggestions from George for you to try. I can see what attracted you to this.
alanuk
[Apr 01, 2013 at 08:36 PM]
As the others have said, it's worth giving this a re-edit. You could even force the saturation to make an abstract out of it; the background colouring would work even better in that way.
One is that it may have looked good to your eyes but hasn't transferred to a two dimensioned photo.
Two is that with a little more work to increase the saturation, lighten that grassy foreground and maybe a touch on the dark area above it, and I think you may have something.
Worth a try.